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                    S J Young
 I am married, 2 children (3 and 10). Born and live in Belfast although I have moved around and worked in a variety of jobs. I write prose and poetry and have had a few short stories published. I would have produced more but life got in the way. Finding a stronger voice now and I feel I have developed a better understanding of the craft aspects of writing, which has always been part of my problem - love the words more than the structure and plot.
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 | Flitflutter  by S J Young |  |  
                    Wrapped in shadow and silver ribbonThe houses are sleeping under a moonglow sky.
 A soft breeze runs through the streets.
 Only the flitflutter of tireless wings against the street 
                      lights and in the distance
 A dog in its prison yard baying at the darkened window
 The boy listens, knowing enough already to plot a course 
                      to a silenced house.
 He is small for his age, dark haired, brown eyed
 Still carrying some layers that wrapped him as a babe.
 There is a booklet of snaps in which he is seen
 Softly held and smiling
 Surrounded by other forms, all outlived.
 There is no easy sense in which they were known to him, 
                      these comforting smilers,
 So he does not yet weep at their passing.
 The view of the street and the imagined deeds are the boy鈥檚 
                      last ritual before sleep
 And he derives a comfort from it all he could not have known 
                      was ebbing.
 He sleeps soundly through the night and wakes to the noise 
                      outside his window
 Late already though it is only just dawn.
 He is one of a few who rise before morning
 To breathe the cool breezes in the softly rising light.
 He dresses quickly and edges round creaking boards
 Like a thief in the house, leaving by the keyless rear.
 The air is sharp though there is a hint of coming heat
 
 Between the gently gusting wind and behind the dark rim 
                      of the mountain, the sky is tinged with light.
 
 He runs through the street looking as he runs to the mountain, 
                      black and silent against the breaking sky.
 
 He runs and finds the others, kindred, all eager, all sleepless 
                      and keen though it is only just dawn.
 
 They stand in the tidy street speaking in whispers so wary 
                      is their presence here.
 
 Sparrows sing, a lone gull cackles and hoots from a rooftop, 
                      pigeons flap and coo.
 
 The air smells of salt seas wafting up from the dock.
 
 The Liverpool boat blows its horn as it enters the Lough 
                      and the seabird swoops from its rooftop.
 
 They stand and they listen and whisper so wary is their 
                      presence here.
 
 They meet every morning before the city moves and go unchallenged 
                      through the streets of the rain washed town.
 
 In the grassy slopes of Pig鈥檚 Entry where swine once 
                      grazed they dig holes
 
 And cover traps for pre-occupied walkers
 
 Breaking bones that step on flimsy surfaces, cracking legs 
                      like brittle straws.
 
 They tie door knockers with string so that no door can be 
                      opened, causing to perish imprisoned old and toothless crones
 
 They pursue cats heavy with night movers and never catch, 
                      even they
 
 They climb drainpipes to stare in through uncurtained windows 
                      at female forms abandoned in sleep
 
 They stand on window ledges and piss dramatically into the 
                      street, each fine arc sparkling in the rising sunlight to 
                      end in a splash mysteriously formed
 
 They collect debris discarded by the dissolving night and 
                      stack and ignite in derelict houses, incinerating whole 
                      streets, towns and cities
 
 They disembowel moths that collisions have halted and pop 
                      bloody spleens with beer bottle caps
 
 They open night drains and fish in the sewer for discarded 
                      condoms on route to the sea that is deep and forgiving.
 
 The morning breaks.
 
 They pause and listen to alarm bells calling from slumber 
                      their resting jailors, all through the street peels the 
                      tinny chorus.
 
 Sore labour hacks and curses into wakefulness, shovels gather 
                      coal from closed yards.
 
 They part, swift and sudden and enter unseen their dosing 
                      houses to slip, unheard, between covers still warm from 
                      the night.
 
 The sun rises, lightening thin curtains, and discovers them 
                      there in the warm hug of sleep innocent, the babes, and 
                      dreaming
 
 A comfort ebbing.
 
 
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