stef
this is gr8 n
shud b on
tv!!!!!!
Tripod
Never leave your
audience in the
dark -
literally. Try
to give some
visual clues in
addition to the
aural.
Eloise
This was a bit
boring and it was
hard to hear what
they were saying.
Caitlin in NZ
I think the
cinematography
is excellent,
the
understanding of
the scene
clearly shown,
brilliant
effects and
fantastic witchy
voices. Top
marks!
Jane
This is very
good, I think it
should go on tv!
Loryn
This is well
good, and the
witchy voices
made me laugh!
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It was very
good! The drums
were good maybe
lasting a bit
too long. But the
flashing entries
were great and
built an
atmosphere. The
second witch's
voice added
great effect and it
could have been
better if the
other two had
done this. The
laugh at the end
was great and
added atmosphere!
It could be
improved by the
other two
witches dressing
and acting like
the second
witch, otherwise super.
Simon Dingwall
Great dramatic
effects and good
ideas. Good
scene and
costume and
reasonable
acting. Not
enough dialogue,
though, so I
feel that the
piece's true
potential was
not completely
unlocked. Good
overall. 7/10.
James Macnrow
This is good the
opening scene
was dramatic and
the voices used
really played a
part.
Jess
This is the very
best so far with
fantastic effects.
haylz
I thought that
it was great.
The entrance was
very good and
made it look
like The Ring!
The drums
went on a bit
too long but
the laugh was
good and
v.scary!
Abz
Really good
acting and the
light effects
were great. The
drumming created
a great effect
also.
Kathryn Harrop
It was very
good, especially
the witch with
the raw voice!
The ending
probably went on
for too long but
overall it was
very good
acting!!!
Jess
I think this is
well good,
especially when
they just appear
at the
beginning. Best one so far.
~*~lora~*~
I really like
this one, it is
really effective
and the laugh at
the end is well
funny.
Robert Glassford
It was very good
how the actors
came on to the
stage. Good on you.
Dominic Smith
OK, bit random
though with the
lights flashing
on and off, good
voice acting by
Steffi Mustard.
Overall, a good
production. 4/5
~SaRaH~
Very effective,
best of 'em all!
The costumes and
the scenery are
so realistic.
Dave
Good beginning and
end but the plot
was a bit
distorted.
