Title: Part 1 of my story opening being read!
Audio by Daniel from Wales | in writing, fiction, short stories
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Okay, so here it is. Part 2 is also now live - see below for the link!
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If I was forced to use one word to describe this, I would have to use the word 'brilliant', fortunately Daniel I am not limited to any, well (actually there may be a max word count here) but any how, I absolutely loved hearing you read this. The descriptions (one of your trademarks) just stand out when read aloud (you really do bring them to life). It's funny too, loved Hoilytin's dead hair and his dry assistant Alice. Really is brilliant. I am so glad you uploaded this. Keep them coming. This is a treat and you read very well too, alot of people, rush or mumble words, you don't. Loved it. Have I already said that?
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I really liked this dan... you sound a little like Alan Davies.. did you know? =] this is a great start and i'm looking forward to listening to some more.. nice one!
TJ xXx
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Wonderful stuff, Daniel. It really brings the story alive to hear it read out loud. And a fantastic cliffhanger at the end. May we have some more?
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Alan Davies? Really? Wow...
Yes, I'm going to record the rest now, it may take a while due to mods though..
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Daniel, Brilliantly read. Simply awesome. =]
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Part 2 is now live! You can find it here:
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Sorry - the link doesn't work cos I put a full stop for the end of the sentence! Here it is again:-
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