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Title: Heartache secrets and betrayal

by Holly from Nottinghamshire | in writing, fiction

SCENE 1 ' SCHOOL YARD
It's break time the school yard is full of teenagers all running around and having a laugh, zoom into one girl and her two friends the girl (Anna) is crying; her friends are desperately trying to comfort her. They are in the centre of the school yard all around them the chaos of break time is happening but no one notices them apart from one tall boy standing against a wall unseen by Anna and her friends his eyes are red and puffy, it's obvious he has been crying he keeps looking at Anna and shaking his head.

SCENE 2 - THE WALL
Cuts to the boy against the wall his name is Tony he's standing with his friend Jack. At first you can't hear what Jack and Tony are saying but you can see them arguing; Tony is disagreeing with Jack. As Tony raises his voice to his friend you hear what they are talking about.
Tony: (Shouting) I can't get over her Ok? She was special and I blew it with her.
Jack: I'm sorry mate, all I meant was if she has been cheating on you surely she's the one who blew it not you, you need to move on; find someone who won't do that to you.
Tony: (Tears welling up in his green eyes) she said if I had been there more then it wouldn't have happened. It's my fault.
Jack: No mate it's not, she was only saying that to make herself feel better it was her and the guy she cheated on you who is to blame. If I knew who he was; he would be in hospital by now for putting my best mate in a state like this.
Tony: Yeah well she didn't say who it was; she said that wasn't important.

SCENE 3 ' SCHOOL LIBRARY
Jack and Anna are huddled together in a corner of the library Anna is crying and Jack is yelling at her.
Jack: Why did you have to tell him you stupid cow. I could have lost my best friend.
Anna: (Hardly hear her through tears) I want us to be together, I love you!
Jack: I told you I can't hurt him like that I'm sorry Anna but I can't, you have ruined everything.
Anna: Please Jack I know how you feel about me.
Jack: I'm sorry
Jack and Anna both look heartbroken they turn to leave and freeze; they see Tony who has been standing behind them the whole time. He shakes his head and looks in disbelief at Tony and Anna, tears silently falling down his face.
Fades to black

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The inspiration came for this story after thinking about the old saying two's company three's a crowd.

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