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• 1. At on 26 Jan 2010, English Host wrote:

  Tee hee - love the safety goggles with no lenses...Brazil again!!
  
  I can't help feeling that this is only the first part of 'Tapped Out' - I want to know what happens to him. Is there more?

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• 2. At on 26 Jan 2010, kim wrote:

  Thanks for keeping these coming Krazmaz, these make me laugh so, like the deep laughs that actually make you feel a bit better when you've finished laughing, they say laughing is good for you. The only thing is, I kind of don't feel that ought to have been the end. I love the details in this, I just wanted it to continue and then you ended it. I would love to see your stories about work related lifestyles put into an anthology. And out of interest what was that noise at the start, were you coughing up a fur ball?

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• 3. At on 26 Jan 2010, Krazmaz wrote:

  That was me growling in consternation, or something approaching it. And the ending might have been a tad abrupt. As for what happens to Jarvis...not much, really. Hah.

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• 4. At on 26 Jan 2010, xCharismaVioletx wrote:

  I like the way Jarvis thinks the comments scratched down as nothing more than satire. And the attachment he has to the fungus is also interesting. As already said, I think there is definite potential for more with this story. But it's up to you of course. Keep these audio posts coming! I love them! Wow I sound like a creepy fan now (not intentional).

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• 5. At on 27 Jan 2010, Krazmaz wrote:

  I might write a continuation, perhaps...though I doubt it'd end well for Jarvis. Hah.

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