Title: Eyes can lie... (Part 1)
Audio by EnchantedKettle from Wales | in writing, fiction, novels
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Eyes can lie ... (Part 1) A story about my Heroine, Rebellion O'connor, next installment coming soon...
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This has ended on a cliff hanger and I'm wanting to know what happens next! How did you feel reading your story aloud? Do you feel it's helped your creativity and the development of the story eg are there areas you feel you could improve on or other ideas that sprung to mind as you read it out?
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I love your descriptions of the people, it's very magical. Is this story on the board? I am looking forward to the next part.
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I'm enjoying this a lot. Good descriptions and an intriguing end. I look forward to hearing some more of this. Do let us all know on the Writing Board when you add some, and give us the URL so we can come and listen!
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I really enjoyed this. Your voice is very nice to listen to. I loved the descriptions of the people, particuarly the Cook and her mole. The names are brilliant as well. I like the ending too - makes me want to hear more! Keep posting please!
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The next installment is now live! Take a look here:
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